Haiku Smile

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Saturday, September 22, 2012

a symbol of love and joy

HAIKU HEIGHTS

Day 23, the topic is HUMMINGBIRD




never smashing the petals
a symbol of love and joy
the beautiful humming birds
 
 
....Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram

 


 

 

8 comments:

PattiKen said...

There's a delicacy to this that I really like.

Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram said...
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Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram said...

Thanking much PattiKen for the rich comment.

Leo said...

I agree with Patti. I love the straightforward, simple yet delicate wordplay in this.

Dear sir, a haiku is much more than just three lines. It has a syllable restricted structure in those three lines too, under 17 in the three lines. :) Whereas there are some form of haiku like the Kanshicho that allow freedom in syllables, at Haiku Heights, I request that you keep it below 17. Thank you.

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Love the way you've painted with words. Great haiku.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I wonder if the hummingbird knows that it's a symbol...

Hummingbird Heaven

Pranita said...

Beautifully done! Very nice...

Kathy Donlan said...

I love that the bird doesn't smash the flowers. He goes about his business so fast, but you are correct, he is careful.